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	<title>Comments on: 10 suggestions for better writing</title>
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		<title>By: My Dollar Plan</title>
		<link>http://www.bripblap.com/2007/10-suggestions-for-better-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-13930</link>
		<dc:creator>My Dollar Plan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Apr 2008 19:38:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the tips. I need to work on the adverbs!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the tips. I need to work on the adverbs!</p>
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		<title>By: Lazy Man and Money</title>
		<link>http://www.bripblap.com/2007/10-suggestions-for-better-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-10768</link>
		<dc:creator>Lazy Man and Money</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Feb 2008 07:14:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I recommend reading Elements of Style by Strunk if you haven&#039;t already.  It&#039;s pretty dry and boring, but it covers many of these - and I think all of the tips from the Orwell essay.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I recommend reading Elements of Style by Strunk if you haven&#8217;t already.  It&#8217;s pretty dry and boring, but it covers many of these &#8211; and I think all of the tips from the Orwell essay.</p>
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		<title>By: Hunter Nuttall</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hunter Nuttall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jan 2008 14:43:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Even worse than &quot;it should be noted&quot; is &quot;as you know.&quot; First of all, people usually say it to me when referring to something that I actually didn&#039;t know. Second, if I knew it, I wouldn&#039;t need them to tell me I knew it. But you know what&#039;s even worse than that? &quot;As you may or may not know.&quot; Can you think of another way to use so many words to say so little?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Even worse than &#8220;it should be noted&#8221; is &#8220;as you know.&#8221; First of all, people usually say it to me when referring to something that I actually didn&#8217;t know. Second, if I knew it, I wouldn&#8217;t need them to tell me I knew it. But you know what&#8217;s even worse than that? &#8220;As you may or may not know.&#8221; Can you think of another way to use so many words to say so little?</p>
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